when they learned i could conjure it they prowled around with interest more than one night i sensed their presence they remained in the shadows until i spoke it has been some years now i’ve received instruction with what to do with it my wife is no longer bothered when i vibrate during sleep she vibrates too they removed or more so transformed that which tormented her that which ailed me soon she and i will leave we’ve been cleared to wander and plant seeds it will be work but entertaining too we’re eager to see new places we will power up and receive new benefit in our work a trail of laughs to replace tears
B, this is a very special piece and unlike anything I've read from you so far. The Babylonian picture at the start of the poem, suggests all sorts of mythic transformative possibilities which are echoed in the poem. I love the possibility of the couples' transformation and their going forth to plant seeds. What kind of seeds will they be planting; will they lead to other tranformations? Mystical and magical and marvelous.
"a trail of laughs
to replace tears"
A new lane.